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Howl For The Moon

Midnight come and the sun goes down.
My love and I sit under the stars,
waiting on the moon.

We embrace in a kiss as it begins to show.
Then something happens I thought ended long ago.
An erge for blood goes coursing through my veins.

I let her go and back away,
She screams and I look away.
My hands are now black covered with fur.

My teeth are now sharp,
and and glisten in the night.
I look to her and she lets out a scream of fright.

As I move towards her I lose control.
This has happned long ago.
I sink my teeth into her throat.

And watch the life flow from her body.
I look to the moon and howl at this curse,
For it has took the one who I loved most.

Im beaten and torn and cant love again.

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Just a Werewolf Love poem never had one of these before.

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  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    October 22, 2007
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    Wounderful!

    A wounderful in deed. However in line 5 I think you ment to use the word thought insteed of though?


  • Aiyoris Maryian
    October 20, 2007
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    Hmmm...werewolf poem. Interesting to say the least. You have a few spelling errors, but other than that, your diction is quite scary. Somehow, this reminds me of Michael Jackson's "Thriller". Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!

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