Now boy I know what you're thinking of
that I'm falling in love.
The question is though I should I admit
do you really deserve it.
Sometimes I get the feeling you're playing with me
which really makes me want to really flee.
I'm not going play like this is some game
my heart is not a trophy to claim.
No I won't say the words you want to hear
not until your feelings are clear.
I'm not the girl who throws it all just for some guy
to all sudden turn around and go bye.
I'm not saying I don't love you
I just want to know you won't leave me for someone new.
Too many times I have seen hearts broken
and girls who were treated like they were a token.
You never say your own feeling of me
and never will that change is what being forsee.
Untill you can get heart to be above
I won't say I'm in love.
Author notes
The song title is from Hercules.
A contest entry
- What's in a name? by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended October 29, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Second chance at gold. by BurmaShave.
525 points, ended November 5, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow aww very deep write my friend such beautiful emotion I loved it thanks for entering
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congrats of your trophy! i love this piece. it isd one of your best. i'm kinda speechless to it. keep up the fabulous writing!
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The syntax of your phrases was a little repetitive in places, and confusing in others. Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck. Matt
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excellent poem congratulations on the previously won bronze trophy good luck in the second chance at gold contest
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Simply Wonderful
Oh wow I love this poem. Good words to live by. This is also my all time favorite disney song. I used to be that girl. I'm very closed off to people...men in particular, because I don't trust them. I still have issues opening completely to my fiance...and we are engaged! So the whole "No I won't say the words you want to hear
not until your feelings are clear."
I've said a million times to myself and my boyfriends. Wonderful write, keep up the great work and thanks for entering my contest. -
"that I falling in love."
Should be 'I'm'.
"derserve"
should be deserve.
"You never say you own"
should be 'your'.
"Too many time I have seen heats broken"
should be 'times' and 'hearts'
Good luck in the contest.
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Thank for comments. I think really improves my work. I hope this poem was a shot to win now. Many Many thanks!
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