we try and try
but we still fail
the more we let go
the more prevails
we can't show
what we don't know
behind others we hide
the truth it brings us pain
we can't tell what we forget
and yet we never regret
from our past nothing we gain
others drive us insane
everyday passes by us
and still we want to die
for little things we move back
for every step we take we lie
the truth is the thing we lack
the trap starts to stack
ourselves we can't let go of
everynight and day
everything makes you lost
for that your life is the cost
for our mistakes we pay
words fall far apart to what they say.
Please tell me what you think
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Great! I like the rythm scheme. It's true also in many ways for me right now. Thanx
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well it'll clear up ok don't worry
and glad u liked it
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That's awesome. It seems to be a little true in a way, though. Good rhyming.
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this is amazing write my dear fatie.. im so proud of u.
its beautifully done and raw ..
well u have said so much with so less words
keep it up
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thanks glad u liked it
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Damn thats pretty much one way to say it, amazing way, u captured all thats been eating me alive in just 24 simple lines
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glad u liked it but come on open up there is more to life
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