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*~ You Soar with Wings of Every Color *~

 

    


I was birthed from the womb of your Spirit
when you whispered my name and I became
your granddaughter.

Tears flooded this frame, colored my skin
in caramel hues rich with sustenance.

An honor I felt to feel your excitement of Life
within an already opened door
and the warmest Welcome sign
you hung with a golden nail;
hammer received from Higher Powers.

My voice suckled the nourishment
of empowerment your energy fed me
after my homecoming.

All negativity buried with broken quills
left in mulch as memory
by those wanderers who stopped dreaming.

My belly became bloated,  full of Faith
after you said~ I Love You

Permananet birthmark recognized by everyone,
second glances I get from curious onlookers
whom I pass while on my travels.

In my Hope chest, the chance of a lifetime
you provided to Paradise at Allpoetry;
still intact,  secured in a Sacred vault.

A spiritual spoon you used to feed
this hungry mouth with words that satiated
for I became another somebody with Soul;
you looked beyond my color.

Those who ventured before me, you immortalized
through columns and let your quill spill ink
with words on papyrus scrolls to live by.

Those who walked on path with Perseverance,
you immortalized, loved ones of Light

also Quoted their words of Wisdom;
your father I see with smile, so Proud.

I imagine them thanking you in Spirit~
while you continue to create
as they pat your back with Appreciation.

You humbled me with meaning, priceless
in its weight, massaged my broken back.

How I brag about stereotypes stricken down
by your unwavered might
where slurs, names to discriminate are of the past.
Your voice of victory carried across Elysium Fields.

Whatever happens, whatever tries to block your path~
I admire you, see you make a road for Seekers to walk;
blood, sweat and tear trails, stain the earth.

My Grandma~ Dreamer~ Guide with staff
who has arrived with Angelic entourage
for those who have fallen trying to find
their Holy Grail...




When I grow up,
I want to be just like you Grandma Renee.
I Love You~

                                                       






Author notes

***I was nudged to add this Grandma...
**http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nvW6nuQ2B0s

He wants one more dance with You!!
Love~Love~Love
as told to me to tell You...
I Love the way You move...
for You taught me a thing or two...

**http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53ith7bNN8w

All I could say was ...Yes Sir...lol
~*~

Super Woman picture~ artist Tom B.

Bottom picture~ took sometime to create
but I hope it brings forth in words...
also energy how much You mean to Me...

and I do Hope this brings forth a smile Grandma~
Love You!!

“Faith is the strength by which a shattered world shall emerge into the light.”
Helen Keller

“Seeing death as the end of life is like seeing the horizon as the end of the ocean.”
David Searls

Best wishes in ALL You do!!

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  • DarkHunter
    October 25, 2007

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    Wow, now that's what you call an exceptional piece of writing. I see that poetryality was deeply touched by this incredible poem for her.
    You have such a gift to be able to move people with words from your heart, your depth is amazing.
    Your way with words has always blown my mind and how you just keep producing work of such a high standard that never ever slips.
    Congratulations on your hm.

    James

  • rgrpaperboy
    October 24, 2007
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    extremely sensational

    Very well written with the emotion cleary seen. Job well done. Rick


  • Yemassee gold member
    October 24, 2007

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    You put s lot of work into this poem, not just the writing but the graphics. I'm sure she appreciated your effort. It's a highly charged poem that expresses how deeply she has affected your life.


  • poetryality silver member
    October 23, 2007

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    Girl please do not add anymore to something that is so beyond me but beautifully penned.. I am so not worthy of all this praise but I do appreciate it and love you dearly for thinking this highly of me. It always amazes me how people can see so much more in me than I see in myself. You have raised me further than I can even come up to. You are such a gem and I am so humbled. Thank you dear heart. I cannot even explain what this poem means to me. You are a blessing in my life. I am overwhelmed in a good way but I am totally flabbergasted at your view of me. I am a modest person. There is never a need for a pedestal my dear. I am equal with the likes of everyone here, no greater or lesser. You are on the same plane with me sweet lady.


    Blessings & Love Always ♥

    Your Grandma


    • Desire gold member
      October 24, 2007
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      as long as this brought for a smile for that is wind beneath my wings I borrowed from You

      Love You Grandma


      I had Spiritual help with the details
      for I cried thinking of how many lives You have impacted...even during difficult times You have endured...You never let that stop You from leaving a feather of Love
      to let others know they are loved

      Thank You

      I Believe in You~
      always have...
      without a doubt...

      and when I can't breathe because of my Heart condition...I think of all the people
      who have touched me...
      believe in me...
      and love me for me...
      so my heart...fights to pump the
      air through...and give me another moment
      with You and all those who make a difference
      in my Life

      Know You can succeed in whatever You set
      Your sights on...
      even IF You cannot see it in the horizon...
      the oyster leaves a pearl behind
      for You to pick up
      and much love~
      Desire~*~


  • Ethereal One gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    excellent expression

    Wow!! You have written such a beautiful poem for your Grandma Renee. Such a giving and loving spirit that has taught you many life lessons, and given to you wonderful spiritual guidance.
    You sure can write girlie!!

    Best wishes in this contest, for this is a

    Love & Hugs,
    Ethereal One


  • Amera gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    This is fantastic! The work of a real artist! Flow, structure, content, verbiage, background and art work; you left nothing out. Powerful and captivating.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • penman gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    Powerful

    Awww, this was so intense and beautiful sweetness. An incredibly gifted poem so touching and uplifting. Best of luck in the contest.


  • HaleyMary
    October 19, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful write, Desire. All the words in this poem are very uplifting to people's spirits. There seemed to be an expression of a great emotion of love in this piece. Best of luck to you in the contest.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    This is so beautiful. Your love, appreciation, devotion, and gratitude flows brightly from your heart into hers. This really touched me. Incredible love you have for so many, but this one has deep and profound meaning. Well done.

    Jeannie


  • Mari Goes gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    I'm sure she is going to cry again when she reads this!
    YOU my dea Desire, has the gift to lift your friends up with your words. A beautiful person who see the best in everyone, that is you and the same goes to Renee.
    Beautiful poem,a nd loved the graphics, specially the sexy superwoman there! Lets buy Renee an outfit just like that one
    Thanks beautiful one, for bringing your lovely words into this contest

    • Desire gold member
      October 19, 2007
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      Thanks Mari
      I keep getting the nudge to add more..

      but I hope she *feels* how much she is Loved...that is important

      Thank You for Hosting~ and giving us this opportunity to voice from the Heart and Spirit


  • StarEyes
    October 19, 2007

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    Holy Smokes!!!!! What a read! This is fantastic girl! I love it!! One can feel your love and appreciation in these words! What a great job on this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!!

    and love

    Nettie

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