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Sterility

Silver reflections on lights lonely dew
Of slivered light's, dew alone
The cliff surrounded and buried low
The wind whistles softly, a changing moan

All hours of day,
All days to night
The peering crescent sun
Leaving, fleeing in fright

Still and silent
Almost solitude
Savoured and blessed
By lacking.

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  • Izu
    October 19, 2007
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    told you asa...spammer.....but anywho, this is great
    (insert 3 clappies)

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    This is a good piece you have such a talent for writing. You should look into getting some of your stuff published . Much love


  • -CrimsonTears-
    October 19, 2007
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    i like it baby...nice job...