Dear Lexi,
I miss you so much. The time is getting closer to when I found out that my dear friend, my little angel went to heaven. How is it in Heaven? Is it pretty? The thoughts of you run in my mind all day. How shy and cute you were; fragile like a porcelain baby doll with beautiful eyes. You were truly angel on earth. Did you know I feel your presence? I know when you come around. I feel your sweet, gentle touch to the hand. It makes me feel warm and safe and that everything will be okay. Did you know a few days before you went to heaven I lost a puppy? I bet you two would get along really well. Do you ever play with him? I wish I can see you again. I always wondered how life would be if we have grown up and went to school together. I was told you said that you loved me and you were sorry for not showing up at dance class. Right before you went on your journey home, when I was at our dance class and I was waiting for you, I saw you mom walk in the door. I got so excited I ran to her with my arms wide open. I looked around her to see where you were. But then I look up at her as tears were rolling down her cheek and she told me that you couldn't play with me any more. You had gone home to heaven. I cried and hugged her and said it's okay. Someday I'll get to play with my dear friend, my little angel again. I miss you and I love you.
Your friend,
Amber xox
Author notes
I had the feeling I needed to write this. It may sound confusing and all. I wanted it more like a letter in a poem that rhymed but I just kept on writing what I felt. If you think of any ideas to make it look and sound better please let me know.
Amber
A contest entry
- Sleep In Peace (Baby Picture Inspiration) by Girl With Guitar.
1100 points, ended November 24, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This poem was amazing. I really liked it, I thought that it was so awsome. Excellent Job
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This letter is so sweet and innocent and touching. I'm glad I came to visit.
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Thank you so much for reading I'm glad you liked it, feel free to read more.
Amber
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"Did you know I feel your presence? I know when you come around." Thought I was crazy for feeling that myself...
Great write. Thanks for the entry
It's not too confusing.
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Thanks for reading I'm glad you liked it.
Amber
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You did a lovely job with this,
Why don't you put it into the workshop for their best advice.
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sorry forgot to applause it woops
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amazing
i loved it its amazing i felt saddened like i was at the dannce class watching that was such a great poem your amazing you trully are amazing and sorry for your loss at such a young age .x. -
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Thanks for reading and the comment, feel free to read more.
Amber
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we keep our loved ones in our thoughts and prayers as you have here, so beautiful and sincere... PK
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Once again Thank you so much for reading and feel free to read more.
Amber
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This is so beautifully written. This is perfection personified
I mean this is hilarious. I loved it. very heartfelt and nice.
Mansoor
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..Thanks. But this wasn't suppose to be "hilarious". My Best Friend died at the age of three and it was very heart breaking for me. I take that kind of offending.
Amber
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I'm sorry for your loss my dear. It's a very good write though...deep, personal and sad. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Keep writing and God Bless
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Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
Amber
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BEAUTIFUL
Amber,
That was so beautiful! Lexi is smiling down on you! You did good, kid!
I do see some things that do need corrected. But nothing changed! You wrote it perfectly! You wrote it for yourself and from your heart! That is two main things that you should always do with your writing. I will IM you with the corrections. An awesome write, my friend! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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You have written a wonderful letter here
In my heart and soul I know they can see us and touch us and they hear everything . When my Mom passed I lost a beautiful diamond and ruby butterfly necklace and i was frantic it was the only one my husband has ever bought for me . I got up one morning and I always get a cup of coffee first thing and guess what was there my neclace .Oh and she also sent me a rainbow on a cloudless day .I believe they are with us always and you can talk to them only we cant hear them . Watch for the little things for they can show theirselves through things about you .And do know you will be together again so show her your smile so she can smile her special smile too .
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Thanks for reading.
Abmer
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the emotions... there's no way anyone can alter this for you, it's your feeling, your deep, pure feelings. very well done, it brought a tear to my eye and I respect your feeling.
Blessed Be.
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Thanks for reading. I miss her so much.
Amber
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oh my gosh
This is a very heart felt dedication to your Lexi.I think it comes from your heart and that is where the best poetry comes from.Blessing to you and Lexi always 
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Thank you for reading, I miss her so much I wish I could hold her little hand again and give her hugs. She was my first an only best friend we were about 3 years old it happened so unexpected and suddlen.
Amber
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