Tiding waters
swells of fates
between
longing hearts,
fervent fingertips;
each day I bend an empty wind
to carry love,
each night
breathful breezing touches
kisses heavy eyes;
loving sleep.
Author notes
thirty words
A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A tender and sweet visual, I think. I like it.
Thanks so much for entering my contest.
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This is soft, and beautiful. I just love the second stanza. It seems separate to me from the other two, just hanging in the middle - smaller, lonelier.
Best wishes in the contest.
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Thank you Stacy
Thank you for your kind words it is always wonderful to hear from you...PK
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This is lovely... like wind through a flute. I've always loved wind... soft breezes of storm wind but I liked the gentle breathings of this one.
~ Nicolette
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Thank you Nicolette
for your wonderful words... PK
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Beautiful.
Amber -
psssst..
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