Yes, we know the rules
How well do you follow them?
Are you, one of those who makes fun of them
They are created to protect you
To make our world safe and happy
There are some who choose not to follow the rules
Sadly we pay for your mistakes
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutely true.I always say I'll only follow a rule if I can see a point to it(not necessarily for myself)I don't hold with rules for the sake of it,but I don't break the law and stick to the important general rules that we need for a safe society.Montey
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i see rules broken all the time, it's not ood for anyone. nice job.
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I believe in rules and equality for all. The rules make the playing ground fair, but only if adhered to. There are times, we must plead for someone to allow us our faults and give grace and maybe break one rule. I think that should be extremely rare and that is what makes the world go round, in my opinion.
BLESSINGS & LOVE,
Doris
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excellent~
Yes
We are indeed a society full of rules....
And if a rule is broken someone somewhere will get his or her dues in the long run.....
Excellent poem sis
Hugs
Susan~~~
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a good poem, aye with rules, there will always be some who will break them, and that can go either way i think with good or bad, bad if destructive yes but good if breaking away from the set to show uniqueness.
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I totally agree with these sentiments, how will people get along with one another if there are no rules. This poem was not too long or too short for its subject, you had just the right amount of words and ideas. fabulous.
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So True
Very well said and I so do agree. The title Rules is perfect and the first line Yes, we know the rules and the last Sadly we pay for your mistakes. My goodness so profound and deep with few words. Hit me hard for it is total truth and reality of life in and of itself. Thank you for sharing your gift to write brilliant poetry. Kelle Marie, stavykm
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I follow but still make fun of them good write
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Sadly this is not follow the prompt so I am removing it.If you want to try again with the prompt that will be fine.Thank you
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