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Layin Here

Layin herein the dark.
I hear u call my name,
and wishin that i could fall into your arms.

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 21, 2008

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    The beginning of something big here. You want to expand it and see what comes out. Got the makings of something.

    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • TOXIC Single Girl
    April 11, 2008
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    hey


  • mysterious.angel
    December 20, 2007
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    ok add more your poems are a little short


  • Lost Emo
    December 20, 2007
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    good short and straight 2 the point.


  • Kal-El
    December 12, 2007
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    mmmmm verry good


  • disenchanted-vampire
    October 19, 2007
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    Aww. Short and to the point I like it.


  • TOXIC Single Girl
    October 19, 2007
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    very good

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