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the sacrifice...

 

 

 

You have been close
starting my days
with a song...

Each day I saw you
and knew soon
it would be the time.

The ultimate sacrifice
to lay down your life
for a friend....

and with your death
I gained strength for tomorrow

the ability to go on

 

and an empty place
inside of me was filled.

your sacrifice shall not be in vain
You shall not be forgotten

it is with profound sorrow

I weep and 

with tears I remember you





but........

you were delicious

I just love fried chicken









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  • Ladybug3151
    March 29
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    LOL Very good! Made me laugh soo hard!

  • Hekate gold member
    March 21

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    lmfao lmfao I was not expecting the end like that omg I am dieing of laughter here hahaha lmfao I love fried chicken to. It's a great food lmfao hahahhahaha


  • HeavensDaughter
    January 4

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    Oh my gosh...this is hysterical! I love it...it was a delight to read.

    I really liked how you played it out so somber and serious only to turn it around into humor.

    Really good write! It had me laughing...and as a survivor...I can use all the laughter I can get!


  • Cutters Shadows
    December 19, 2007
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    haha, that had me laughing so hard haha!

    Monica <3


  • raggyann
    December 16, 2007
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    lol this was great i loved your twist on the end
    great

  • CrYbAbY829
    December 15, 2007
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    wow this was sooooooooooo funny...thanx for makin me laugh...it was just the thing i needed

  • kirkman
    December 9, 2007
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    DEEEELightful!!

    Well, you succedded in leading me down a primrose path! Thanks for the laugh!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    forgot your clapies

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    Oh my gosh This was yeah ok lol this is great thank you for the laugh best wishes

  • Angelic Princess21
    December 9, 2007

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    *laughs* oh my daddy this was really good. great funny write. you always make me smile and laugh and this helped alot. thanks for sharing this.
    love u daddy s
    Angel

    . Rewarded 4


  • SweetNessaLynn
    November 12, 2007
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    hahaha this is a good one. I like it but in the beginning I was ready to cry.

  • stinkletoes
    November 3, 2007
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    Chicken? you almost made me cry! lol this was funny.

  • Gogetalife
    October 20, 2007

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    hehee..lol...u made me in tears then shoked me hehee...oh Mark, you are something..lol..i thought u were talking about me...hahahaaa..kidding..BTW I hate fried chicken lol
    AJ


  • wildfiredreamer gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    that is cute, what a sense of humor. I like it tanks for making me laugh


  • angelicfaith silver member
    October 19, 2007
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    lol daddy your funny you made me laugh and i love you


  • ButterflyforChrist silver member
    October 19, 2007
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    I crack up everytime i read this. I love it daddy! I love you!

    ~me~


  • SweetXDestiny silver member
    October 19, 2007
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    lol daddy very nice
    i love you
    your,
    princess

  • Reborn Surrender
    October 19, 2007
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    That's cool man Nice work


  • sinnocence
    October 19, 2007

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    hehe, your so funny Daddy. *hugs*
    hehe... fried chicken...
    i am cracking up and my little sister is giving me a strange look and going, what's so funny???

  • higgaion
    October 19, 2007

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    lol

    Man! I thought you were all serious but no just really hungry or something! Thats so awesome. God bless man this is so funny! JJ

  • theXmadXhatter
    October 19, 2007

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    haha. That definately put a smile on my face. It seemed all sad and about friendship and losing one and then the chicken comes. Great way to start my day.
    Keep up the great work.
    love always and forever, Marissa Rae


  • SpiritOfForgiveness
    October 19, 2007
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    Oh my goodness....I LOVE IT!!!


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    lol you got me there Mark lol I was all sad thinking of losing a friend, and up pops the chicken! lol excellent you always have a way of bringing my heart smiles thank you for this ~blessings always~

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