Out there,
somewhere,
where water
flows with such
ease.
and birds can fly
without help from the breeze.
and you don't need wings
nor a halo to say-
"Heaven is here-"
You don't need airplanes
to find it,
nor a boat to sail,
or holy water to extingish Hell.
Don't use your car to drive all the way
cos your only adding mileage.
Out there,
somewhere,
where God's creations
survive.
And people pray without
someone demanding they do.
and church isn't always so
necessary to be close to God
and you need not wings
nor a halo to say-
"I know why u need not to die
to go to Heaven."
A contest entry
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425 points, ended October 23, 2007, 72 entries
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I think that the "u" in the second to last line should be a "you" going by the overall vocabulary of the poem.
One doesn't need "Church" at all to believe, praise, or Worship god. The "Church" is the essence of capitalism, power, and control.
Other than the "u", a nice poem that you have written here.
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