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tick tock, tick tock

tick tock. tick tock
lulling sound of alarm clock
shrill ring shatters dreams

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 19, 2007

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    Another great haiku by Billbard--you are a haiku "great!"
    Good luck in the contest! Like your haiku because you always add subtle humor.


  • ma belle
    October 19, 2007
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    This is great! And so funny
    hahaha
    Best of luck in the contest. Great entry! Belle


  • azure85 gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    LOL I am laugjing at yours and malabu's comments! At least if you went back to the time of rooster's crowing, you could have a nice chicken supper waiting for you when you got home! Good Everday Haiku!


  • Malabu
    October 19, 2007
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    more like shock treatment


    tick tock tick tock
    one shrilling clock
    hits the floor

    where was I?