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She Drained Me Under Stars











Inside reason,
our birth was secret
echoing a silent plea

of morning's beauty
that sighs in your wake,
and holds wintery dreams
to lay across my lap
of warm springs.

Native life
across flurrying wild
of neighing tribes,

a grassblades's bending
to paint me,
and you
in the arms of years

in a brush stroke
of nature.

Twilight's concoctions
served us through patience
as wonder desserts

of toiling fruit
that I cropped,
whence you sowed our love

in soils of feritility
and maternity birthed,
us in beddings

of night's shelter.





























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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 20, 2007

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    Ohhhhhhhhh, stunnign write...simply stunning, with messages in between the liens for soul to capture...