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Loss

all the things we had
out of all that happened
i don't regret a thing
to regret is to look back with pain
i look back on the fun
playing soul calibur
you kicking my but at it.
having long talks about nothing
SHOES!
but the only thing i look back and wish
is that we would have stayed friends
the way we were
without the pain
only the plans
i would have given you my life
and i would still
be my friend again
help mend my broken heart
with your friendship
i will no longer have regret
maybe then i could move on from you
and live life
without the pain in my heart
created by the loss
of my best friend

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  • Angel of Night
    October 21, 2007

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    I do not know exactly who you are talking about. But if you ever need to talk you know places to find me. ^.^ It's very well written and I enjoyed it. Really sad though. Keep it up. ;P


  • Robyn
    October 19, 2007

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    Oh Oh, I love this write. My love I feel your pain In every word, in every letter. I love this so much. Every word lets me feel how you feel, the pain, the love. This was a pleasure to read.

    Robyn