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Candlelight

A gentle flicker
Sings you to sleep on this night
You're safe in the dark.

Author notes

A haiku I thought up along with the others that didn't make it here. Hope it's good, it was kind of in the moment.
Cj

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  • Wind Walker
    October 24, 2007

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    A nice write --- BUT

    this is a Senryu not a Haiku - both are allowed here - Haikus' require a seasonal reference - I like this one
    Good Luck
    B D


    • Celticjedi
      October 24, 2007
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      Oh yeah, sorry, I forgot. Haikus are about nature. Oops. Thanks for reading it though, and liking it. I need to remember these things.
      Cj


  • So Strange
    October 23, 2007
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    Hmm...this was really good to be a haiku. I don't usually like this kind of poem, but you made one that I enjoyed a lot. I think you told a lot in such a few words. Why didn't you win anything? HAHA

    Keep up the great work, Hannah. I look forward to many more pieces of yours that are as great as this one is.


  • Dlvvanzor
    October 21, 2007

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    Beautiful! Great write sis!

    You write great haikus
    wonderful writing my sis
    I wish you good luck.

    (heh, I'm so funny. LUV YOU!!)

    -Dlvvanzor


  • kyuuketsuki ai
    October 20, 2007

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    Ahahahahaha.Is it strange that it seemed vampiric? Theres something wrong with my mind...yay. A really good haiku, at least, I think so.


  • Twilight Moon
    October 19, 2007
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    i like it very kinda sweet

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