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Farewell

6:20 am
A star fell from the sky
It went through our hearts and made a big hole forever.
A few raindrops fell...
They announced the storm that will never be forgotten
The storm that took the best Angel of them all
and returned him to his eternal home.
As he was leaving in the paradise above us
Blackness covered our broken hearts.
Silence.
The Angel is now our saviour forever.
Weeping.
Roses, sadness, tears and darkness...
We know that
God needed His Angel back.
But why that soon?
Why Dear God?
He had so much more to smile for
And so much more to live for
The beauty of life was always his message.
But every flower withers
And every life has it's departure.
Heaven is now his final home,
But our hearts will always beat together for his eternity.

Rest In Peace

We will always love you

Author notes

There are no words that can describe the pain we all feel for you.
R.I.P. Tose!
(1981 - 2007)

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  • BloodWhiteOleander
    January 10, 2009
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    good work

    its nice i like it.

  • judmc
    January 10, 2008

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    great poem

    a beautiful poem it really brought tears to my eyes and a lump to my throat god blessyou, keep writing judmc


  • Aiyoris Maryian
    October 23, 2007

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    Your lost one knows that you miss them. I'm sure that they love this poem as well. THe pain is always going to be there, but I trust that Jesus will help you through it. I'm praying for you.

  • Ready for 2010
    October 22, 2007
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    Hi sis

    This is a beautiful dedication that is done here and very outstanding poem that is written way to go sis keep up the marvelous work dat u do.. sorry for your lost sis hugs to ya hope ure doin okay.. great job with writing this amazin write of full expressin and full of heart and soul with deepness.


  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    October 20, 2007

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    I am so sorry for your loss Verica. Sometimes you just have to trust in God and believe that its all for the better. A beautiful dedication.


  • SpydurPoet
    October 20, 2007
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    Wow. That made me want to cry. You did such a great job with this.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • midnight eyes
    October 19, 2007
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    Beautiful poem, sorry for the lost.


    I have some new poetry on my page and I also have a Halloween contest running it ends Oct. 31st go check it out if you like.



    Amber


  • Jessmassacre
    October 19, 2007
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    this poem was beautiful.

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