In perfect tune they play their song
entwined forever they belong
as day she needs the night to sleep
the darkness in protection keeps.
As one gives light, the other waits
bestowing veils to all of sleeping state
across the earth light's shadow wakes
a time when all in life partake.
In strength to find the way they spin
each to the other they are a twin
curled together as creation lives
to each their all they both do give.
Till end days they live together
through brilliant days and stormy weather
in partnership revolve in peace
until time comes for all to cease.
A contest entry
- Night and Day by Princess Perdue.
1000 points, ended October 31, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the rhyme and how the words flow. I like how the words for rhyming were chosen they really fit to their respective lines.
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Wow!!
Wonderful piece penned
Love the way You brought this verse to our eyes
Love the lines:
Till the end days they live together
through brilliant days and stormy weather
Powerful message You give
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Rhyme is my favourite and this is certainly rhymed well. Beautifully presented with stunning imagery and so very peaceful to the readers eye. Thank you so much for your beautiful entry.
Shaz xx
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you may know i am a twin gaylene,, so i had to read this. your beautiful poetic relationship, is far more of a bond than brother and me have, lol lovely writing and imagery bol xxpp
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