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My Letter...To you

Hello Again My Beloved,

 

Here I am.

Sitting in the cold, moonless night.

Thinking of you...

Watching the fall leaves..

Tumble carelessly to the frosted ground.

Hopeing my heart doesn't fail from the pain.

 

So long it's been.

Since i've seen your face.

Your voice haunts my dreams.

I long to again,

Be locked in your arms.

But so many more years,

Will come to pass.

Before you can once again be mine.

 

I pray,

That fate does not deal us another bad hand.

I live for you.

For what we could have together.

Oh lover...

It's been so long!!!

You're so far away...

And yet...

In the coming months..

You'll be even further from my soul...

 

I long for your touch..

For the feel of security...

Of peace...

I get when I'm with you.

My soul,

cries out in anguish..

Tormented by your voice.

The memories have never been enough.

The thoughts are driving me mad.

My life has no meaning...

No sustance..

Without you in it.

 

So please,

My Promised...

Come home to me.

Safe...

And whole...

I miss you so terribly...

But i'm always...

and will always...

Be right here waiting...

 

To you..

My heart...

 

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  • Sweeney
    November 17, 2007

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    All I can say baby is thank you. You know me... and you know how I am, this actually pulled tears from me. I like these words in the poem best though, "will come to pass" just remember that my love all this come to pass no matter how bad or good they will come to pass and I will be home in your arms and you in mine.


    • irishmidnight
      November 18, 2007
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      I miss you...I dont even know what to say to this comment...I just miss you...so god damn much!!! You leave me breathless and you aren't even here...!!!


  • irishxrose
    October 24, 2007

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    Another beautiful poem sweetie. I love your work, but I've told you that before. I love the line "hoping my heart doesn't fail from the pain". You are an inspiration to me. I am always moved by your poetry honey, and your love for him is so strong. He'll come home darling, don't worry. Love you!


    • irishmidnight
      October 24, 2007
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      Irishxrose

      Hey babe...tank yous!!!!! **grins** I'm gonna go read some of your poems now...hee hee!!


  • ChemicalArtemis
    October 24, 2007
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    Beautiful...
    I find it inspiring yet I cried...


  • RX-Queen
    October 24, 2007

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    Great poem, I really like this part "Tumble carelessly to the frosted ground.
    Hopeing my heart doesn't fail from the pain." love the imagery in that line, seems to bring your pain to life.
    again, this is a beautifully painfull write, can't wait to read more.

    • irishmidnight
      October 24, 2007
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      SoulSerenity

      Why thank you...I wasn't so sure about this one...it was just kinda...there...if you know what i mean...**hugs** thanks for the comploments though...they bring a huge grin to my face!!!

  • ub
    October 24, 2007

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    Fucking awesome! Wait, can I say "fucking" on here? Well, in any case, it's simply brilliant.

    It oozes with raw emotion and passion, and leaves you down on your hands and knees hoping that it never ends.

    Ok, reading it again.

    Take care.


    • irishmidnight
      October 24, 2007
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      UB

      **laughs in delight** Thank you!!! **hugs** thats the best comment I could've ever dreamed of!!! **blushes**


  • PastelMoons gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    And purely beautiful
    remarkable write,
    I can feel you--
    the heart ache and the longing
    and I am moved.
    Outstanding!!!
    ~Pastel


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 21, 2007
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    purely love

    I understand the longing here. Great write.
    Judy

  • near1202apocalypse
    October 21, 2007

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    Made me cry!!!

    This was a very sad poem with a lot of emotion and feeling coming straight from the heart. makes me think of my ex. Beautiful!


  • x--nocturnia--x
    October 21, 2007

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    This, even formless, is beautiful. It dances like a song, and it pulls at the heart like a beaten puppy... Many know the pain you describe, but it's never the same, and it never helps. keep livin doll...

    • irishmidnight
      October 21, 2007
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      satanic-faery

      You know I will. He's my heart and soul...and I pray he comes home to me alive and well...the poem has no from...hee hee...becuz I was too darn lazy to give it form...**winks** I love you too by the way...**hugs** and your words make me feel better already!!!


  • Fiona Hollywood
    October 19, 2007

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    This really caught my eye. Even though an insane amount of poems are written on this same subject, this one still feels individual. hard to read, but in a good way... because I can really feel what you're going through

    • irishmidnight
      October 21, 2007
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      I couldn't agree with you more...there are alot of this poem out there...but to that one person...and a select few...it makes a world of difference...thatnk you so very much for taking the time to comment my poetry with such kind words!! I'll have to repay the kindness soon!!! **hugs**


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    October 19, 2007
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    another great write of pure you... very well done xxx


    • irishmidnight
      October 21, 2007
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      Anguas-Confusion

      **grins** thanks babe!! You always make me smile!!!


  • xRAYEx
    October 19, 2007
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    Beautiful. I could feel the emotion in your writing...


    • irishmidnight
      October 21, 2007
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      Dupont89

      Thanks so much for taking the time to read it!! That means alot to me!! **hugs**

  • Coheedence
    October 19, 2007

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    Good usage of description amongst where you were in your mind, however I do have a question..What exzactly happened? Who is this too, none of my business I know, but I also know my fair share of loves lost and wished upon. I do like the poem, It is a perfect poem to me anyways, for all poetry that comes from the heart is perfect, for poetry is the heart in words.

    • irishmidnight
      October 21, 2007
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      Coheedence

      I have no problem with you asking...none at all..but be forewarned...**grins** its a long story...This is to the man who holds my heart mind and soul!!!
      OK so my freshman year in high school ((five years ago)) he and I had a relationship going for a lil over a year...then his mother forced him to move to michigan with his father to get away from me...((she thought i was a bad influence becuz I showed him he had a mind of his own)) But yeah...so he's been in michigan for 5 years...we lost contact about a year and a half after he left and didn't find each other until recently. I am now 20...and have a two year old son...he's in the USAFSP ((us airforce special forces)) And doesn't know when he's coming home...we're madly in love...like insanely...have been for 6 years...and this poem/letter is just a short speal from my heart and the pain inside...if you want to know anything else just know all you have to do is ask...i dont' mind telling you...and thanks so much for taking the time to wonder!!!! **hugs tightly**


  • Knight70 silver member
    October 19, 2007

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    a testament of true love.....

    These are beautiful words for the one you cherish. May all of your dreams come true. Don

    • irishmidnight
      October 21, 2007
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      Don

      **smiles** I pray they do come true...thank you so much for being the one who always understands!!! **hugs** Your wife is a lucky lady!!!


  • HaleyMary
    October 19, 2007

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    This is beautiful. It shows a lot of emotion and it makes me think of how people long to be with someone who they love, whether it's someone they loved in the past and still hope to love in the future, or love in the present time. Thanks for sharing this piece. Keep writing.

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