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Falling Apart

You can't see a smile
Covered by the tears
You can't hear a laugh
Drowned out by the sobs

Every night in my room
I secretly cry myself to sleep
Every day in the halls
We look the other way

~
Chorus;

When every step I take
Feels like I'm gonna fall
And every tear I cry
Feels like I might lose it all

It's when I cry
And my breath is dying
When I try to smile
But I keep crying

That's when I fall apart

~

You can't understand someone
Who hides who she is
You think someone's happy
When their smiles are always fake

Every day in class
I hide in the back
And every day at home
I pretend I'm just fine

~
Chorus;

When every step I take
Feels like I'm gonna fall
And every tear I cry
Feels like I might lose it all

It's when I cry
And my breath is dying
When I try to smile
But I keep crying

That's when I fall apart

~

You can't see the real me
I'm hidden far away
It's impossible to know me
I'm just another fake

~
Chorus;

When every step I take
Feels like I'm gonna fall
And every tear I cry
Feels like I might lose it all

It's when I cry
And my breath is dying
When I try to smile
But I keep crying

That's when I fall apart
I think I'll fall apart
I just might fall apart
I'm falling apart

I'm losing it all.

Author notes

You gotta love those problems in life. :[

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  • DeSiBoO14
    May 29, 2008

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    aWw!!dIs WaS rEaLy sAD..bUt TrU 4mOsT oF uS!!iNo ItS tRu 4Me!!DiS wAs A gReAT sOnG!!i LuVd It!!..ChEcK oUt My WoRk 2!!...


  • - Injected Fear -
    February 25, 2008
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    I can't believe I haven't commented this yet.. Though, I haven't even written anything for over a year.. :/ But yeah! As far as songs go, this was good.. But definately sad But don't ever think you're alone, because I'm always either with you or just a phone call or message away, okay? I love you!


  • MiSs ImPeRfEcTiOn
    February 7, 2008
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    kool kool


  • ShadowsOfControl
    November 2, 2007

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    holy crap i remember when I read this in chem
    it's still amazing!!!!
    :]]
    Just remember that I'm here for you
    whenever you need me...
    and yeah LIFE does suck sometimes...
    but sometimes all we can do
    is keep pushing forward...


  • otakuchick89
    October 20, 2007
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    BTW you have to sing some of these to me some day!!
    they're so AMAZING!


  • otakuchick89
    October 20, 2007

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    I LOVED IT!!

    ya those probs in life SUCK!! but they're there because well....tha'ts life!! LOL!! hopefully things will work out!!
    AWSOME WRITE!!


  • infernalxfidelity
    October 19, 2007

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    hmmmm...the chorus was pretty good. it was over all a good song...but definetly really sad. i hope you feel better. <3

    ~~Wish addict

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