Why did you do this to me? \you knew i was vunurable
you knew my son just died so depresed and alone
feeling lost and dead inside and out then you came into
my life making promises you haven't kept you said you
wanted to take care of my child and myself you said you loved me
but know i know you told me nothing but lies and promises that never came
and now i can't take no more to much pain to many lies
how can i go on with you theres no trust no honesty from you
all i see is your lies and pain in my heart you promised to protect us
lies all lies now the end is near i told you today i can't do this
it's to hard to painful my heart is broken you broke it i cry day and night
know that it's really over it will never be fixed i tryed you wont
so now i say to you goodbye i will never forgive you you hurt us
with your false promises my dreams are shattered im alone so just remember
you hurt us and now you have lost us
A contest entry
- What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
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i liked the flow of this write...i just think that it can could be formatted in another way...thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!
~NineTailedFox

