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Twilight Zone Poem

I feel
like
I'm in
the
Twilight
Zone.

I glance
towards
the television
again.

It really
is you.
Sitting
there,
being
interviewed.

By Letterman,
in New York.

You told me
you were a
writer,
but used
your real
name.

I take
another
sip of my
martini,

and wonder
what I'll
say when
we meet
again.

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Comments


  • Annalise
    November 5, 2007

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    That last stanza really pulled this piece together...

    I've never drank a martini. Too bad my drinking days are over...

    Nice poem you have here.


  • Tam
    October 19, 2007

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    BRAVO!

    Excellent write...great job with the contest prompts! I am impressed....and intimidated! LOL
    I thought I might try this one also, but this is GRAND!
    This is going to be very difficult to top...
    Blessings! Tammy


    • islekine gold member
      October 19, 2007
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      It came from the Twilight Zone

      believe me! And DO write for the contest.....
      It's not THAT good...but thanks for your wonderful comments.
      Write on!
      *PEACE*