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Ex Rhyme

You had my heart why?, I don't know
when did you become such a nasty hoe

You make me sick Just to think
You'd probably do the kitchen sink

Layin' down up all night
what you do that ain't right

I'm not mad just relieved
It was you I never believed

Girl just go your dead to me
I don't believe in ghosts so you i don't see

So stay your ass far away
I don't need crabs today

 

Bitch for you I have no time

But for you I wrote this rhyme

Author notes

just writing how I'm feeling

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  • TacoSexyFail
    October 19, 2007
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    I like this. Great rhyming, I loved the rhyme scheme also.


  • Elizabeth883
    October 18, 2007

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    That is an awesome write, and a very sore subject. I am sorry she is such a bitch to you darlin, but better things are to come. Keep your chin up Dave, you are amazing dollface ♥