I'm in so deep
That I'm uncertain
About what I'm doing
Or where I'm going
This is all new
But somehow it feels
So right, so perfect
I want to spend
Every spare moment
Close to his presence
All my thoughts
Are focused on him
And just him alone
I can't seem to
Do anything else
Everything I do
Involves him
My love for him
Just keeps growing
In leaps and bounds
My life has changed
So drastically
Since we've met
I'm headed down
An unknown path
So fast I can't stop
Going into uncharted
Virgin territory
Because I'm in so deep
With my love for him
Author notes
Fourth verse:
I want to sleep in your moonglow
in my mind your smile I keep
head over heels I go,
like a dream from peaceful sleep
this time I know i'm in deep.
I love TR
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Comments
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hmm... sis that's not bad and I can completely understand that.
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this was really nicely written, really romantic and the kind of thing I have rehearsed in my head before lol nice write well done xx
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You have truly written a masterpiece. Thanks for this, I enjoyed this part the most:
Every spare moment
Close to his presence
All my thoughts
Are focused on him
And just him alone
Great words, and great work.
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I love it! It's amazing! Describes your feelings perfectly. I love all of it, but I especially love the fourth verse. Wonderful word choice
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nice write
thanx for entering this is a good write,has an easy flow, goodluck in my contest! plz do not respond to this comment until contest is over. -
Whoa!
U r so whipped if this is true...lol!
Anyway, very incredible poem with amazin description and wording! I really really love this poem. There's not much to say but whoa how mellow and subtle!
VERY, VERY GOOD JOB!
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