SUMMER
HOT HUMID
PLAYING SLEEPING LAUGHING
OCEAN FAN MITTEN HOODIE
FREEZING SKATING SNOWBOARDING
COLD WET
WINTER
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Author notes
Just learned this form in school...and today is my 12th birthday......yay me!!!!!
Diamante:
Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subect
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subect
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subect, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ At this moment.... by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended November 11, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I don't know how to write a Diamante, but this makes me want to learn how. Very nicely done. You are a good young poet.
Kelli -
Oh this is very nicely done. i like the comparisons and you did well with the seasons. Great job and good luck.
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Dear Jo,
Well done on your Diamante, you must feel very proud of your achievement and I can see that you Mom is very proud of her Daughter.
Happy 12th Birthday.
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Wow!! Look at you with your fancy, smancy Diamante poem!!! I haven't even gotten out of the basic 4 stanza forms and you have already written a diamante! This was a perfect subject for this form, too. I would never have thought of it.
and Happy Birthday to you, too. If I could sing worth a pile of beans, I would have left you a voice mail - but I can't, so be glad I didn't do that (be very, very glad)
I pray God's blessing over you this year and that His favor continue to pour down on you and that everything you put your hand to do would prosper and be successful!!!!!
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You did a great job with this Diamante Jo. I enjoyed reading it. Of course I enjoy everything about you.
I love you, and I wish you the best in the contest.
Sam
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