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Cocktail Visions

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I’m looking through tall glasses
trying to figure out how I got here
The once bitter tasting liquid
sliding down easier now

shoulda’s 
         coulda’s
                  woulda’s

flashing  past me as I glance
at the ice dancing  in my 5th refill
My eyes becoming blurred
head pounding, stomach queasy

 

Having my fill of 80 proof
it’s time to stagger home
pondering the thought of when
I will stop  needing these evening cocktails
to face the dreaded mornings





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  • CherryOnTop
    November 14, 2007
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    This just depicts life as it really is.I love your work.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 20, 2007

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    oh my..hwo truly evocative a write.... I know so many who drown themselves in this beauty but come out lookign so much the worse for glassware.


  • moluv10
    October 19, 2007

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    Another brilliant take on the picture. I can relate to this. I sometimes feel the need to have a drink just to help me relax after a hard day.