Orange fall broke mankind
so dead climb crucified not
water of resurrection
A contest entry
- Haiku by bethan-gaze.
750 points, ended October 19, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hmmm this piece is so awesome...very full bodied...I so love this!!! forgive me if just a bit incoherent but hey, you left me a bit speechless here...smiling
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thank you
I must say that I love your comment. -
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Good...that was my intention to let you know that I enjoyed this write, so if you loved my comment that is quite a plus.
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Well, this tied me in knots for a while until I attempted some unravelling ...
there is a fair bit going on here if I'm correct at interpreting this. You pack so much in here with the "fall, the crucifixion, the resurrection" ... Wow!
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thanks so much
This was a wonderful opportunity to write the opening stanza for a haikai no renga. That kind of team effort poetry would be challenging to bring into an aesthetic continuum for itself. Jesus provided the alpha and omega lines for the Universe1, and humanity need merely discover how His work relates to them.
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