One road to freedom
Salvation awaits you there
When you Cross My path
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by bethan-gaze.
750 points, ended October 19, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I think being able to write a haiku you have to have a talent for that.
You have a talent for this and i always enjoy reading them, any of your work for that matter.
Be well!
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just a beautiful haiku....
I can see why you got a silver with this, Himler. It's fantastic writing, without a doubt.
Don
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Thanks Don, I also loved this one... It was weird how I wrote this one.. I literally did in 2 minutes (and that was including the counting of syllables)
Hugz
Himler
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ayy .. I made a really good comment on this and it just got deleted
I'll try again - I was basically talking about how deep this poem went and how thought provoking it was and also that I might still not be able to get the true meaning
And congratulations for your trophy
All the best and keep writing,
Never ♥
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Thank you so much for the kind comment. I really tried to put as much depth and meaning into these few lines as possible. I am very glad you oliked it.
Hugz
Himler
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Very excellent Haiku and I delighted in reading this, thank you for sharing ~blessings to you always~ congrats on your silver
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Thank you very much and blessings to you too.
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I can't decide which line I prefer ... think it has to be the last line "when you cross my path" ... love the play on words and the simplicity and depth within this piece. Thanks for entering.
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Thankyou very much again for the silver. I am very glad you liked it.
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