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[ above the normal plane ]

above the normal plane
the image of the man
above all

In a list

A contest entry

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  • bethan-gaze
    October 19, 2007

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    I understand where you're going with this and I heartily agree with it.  You give us a great deal of depth in three lines ... thanks for posting!


    • Pollycheck
      October 19, 2007
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      bethan-gaze

      Thank you for the HM and for hosting this contest.


  • Papyrus
    October 18, 2007
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    above all, He is, yes, but sure didn't act that way

    -Pap.


    • Pollycheck
      October 18, 2007
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      Papyrus

      Thank you for stopping by and commenting. It is appreciated.


  • azure85 gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    Very well done, and such great thoughts within this haiku. It is excellent for the image of the cross on the hill, and the meaning behind it.


    • Pollycheck
      October 18, 2007
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      Susie

      Thank you so much for your kind comments. I am glad that you enjoyed my haiku.

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