Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

[ final curve ]

final curve
of narrow path
touching the sky

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Pollycheck
    October 20, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I love this haiku. It offers such hope for the people who really try to walk the straight and narrow. It is a great haiku.

    LJ looks at the path
    that touches the sky
    turns and walks away


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Love this, but that isn't news because I always love your haiku--excellent haiku writer that you are! Congratulations on the trophy!


  • bethan-gaze
    October 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Another delicious haiku that is a beautiful interpretation of the picture.  You're so right ... it is open and wild and very beautiful and your last line is a perfect description. 

  • quakietree
    October 19, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    What a pretty picture.