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The Holy Place

A path up the hill,
Leading to a sacred place,
A place of much prayer.

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  • bethan-gaze
    October 19, 2007
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    You know, if you ever visit this place you will be immediately impacted by the sense of peace that is endemic around the place.  It is one of my favourite places and you manage in three lines to sum up part of this beauty ... for sure, it is "a place of much prayer."