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A Good Friend

A good friend

will stand at your side

reducing bad tidings

misgivings to override

 

Upholding your spirit

revaluing the trust

hold dear your good friend

this bond is a must

 

Never forsake

or neglect your good friend

the nourishment bestowed

you must cherish and tend

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  • Bob Fox
    November 9, 2007
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    So true

    And as we see them pass on it seems hard to replace them. So we should treasure them always


  • Stardust100
    November 3, 2007
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    So true so true. A good friend is also so very hard to find


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Amen to that!

    My very best friend in the world, Colleen, is a boon to me for sure. She will laugh with me, cry with me, stand up for me...Ya...she's a great friend. I hope I am as good a friend to her as well, and I think I am!
    Pam


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 29, 2007
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      thank you pam... i bet you are a great best friend as well. bless xxxppg


  • Passionate Phoenix
    October 22, 2007

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    this was good, plenty of truth behind this write, well done and thanks so much for entering! xx


  • Knight70 silver member
    October 21, 2007

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    true testament of friendship.....

    Never forsake

    or neglect your good friend

    the nourishment bestowed

    you must cherish and tend



    I love the truth in this. It's an inspirational piece, that's for sure, Peter. Knight70


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 19, 2007

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    A poem I should memorize because of the universal truth and honesty in it--great read and one I enjoyed reading a lot!


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 19, 2007
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      it would be lovely if you could memorise maggie.. i have tried all day lol xxpp

  • amysticwriter silver member
    October 19, 2007
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    Love this...friendship is one mind found in two bodies...LM


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 19, 2007
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      yes. spot on mary, thats what i think as well, thanks and hugs. love xxpp


  • ennovy silver member
    October 19, 2007

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    Thats what friends are for, to be there, loving, caring, tenderly. Yet sometimes we don't see the real value of a real friendship. This poem is a beautiful wake-up call. Never to forsake you friends.....excellent write....novy


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    A very beautiful poem Peter! I love this one. Everything you said here is so true and you have written in so poetically.
    Wonderfully penned.
    Gaylene

    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 19, 2007
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      thanks gaylene, my poems are becoming shorter, as my life does lol glad you enjoyed ..your comments mean a lot xxpp


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    October 19, 2007
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    Friendships are worth more than gold.

    Thank you my friend.....

    Kitten
    xxxx


  • no win no fee
    October 19, 2007

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    good friends are few and far between and you are right they should be valued. They are priceless gems. x


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 18, 2007

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    My distinct pleasure to be the first to review and to view this one, a poem after my own heart hahaha what can one say about "friends" well, "priceless" comes to my mind. An excellent friendship poem, Peter. I knew it was in you lol

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