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Christianity

Christianity
landed solidly here
and left its mark

Author notes

5/6/4

A contest entry

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  • Never Fall in Love
    October 19, 2007

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    It did definately landed very solidly. I don't normally read these kinds of poems .. but I thought what the heck. This is really good and really profound

    Cangrats on the trophy

    All the best and keep writing,
    Never ♥


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 19, 2007

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    Excellent Haiku and I delighted in reading this, thank you for sharing, and congrats on your bronze ~blessings always~


  • bethan-gaze
    October 19, 2007

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    Perfect!

    Beautiful and succinct ... your last line is breath-taking.

    Thanks so much for entering this.