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Heartbreak

The pain at times seems so unbearable,
the love will never die out.

The tears are temporarily,
but the piercing sorrow last forever.

Vandilizing my heart,
passion invades my soul.

Letting go is hard,
but holding on hurts even more.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    DEEP EMOTION!!!!

    Your heartbreaking words describe how one truly feels when they lose the one they love. Holding on has a deep and lasting hurt and sometimes letting go hurts just as bad.


  • Re-invention silver member
    October 18, 2007
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    wow! I love the last line,
    letting go is hard,
    but holding on hurts even more. wonderful.!