Emerald island,
bearing cross of certain faith;
oasis of holiness.
Author notes
Picture Inspiration: (Llanddwyn Island, Anglesey).
A contest entry
- Haiku by bethan-gaze.
750 points, ended October 19, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the "emerald island" part of this haiku ... it's so true! And, for sure, it is an "oasis of holiness". Thanks for posting this.
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Yes, this is a lovely haiku, inspired by this wonderful picture given to inspire writers. Not sure if you wanted this to be traditional or modern, but syllable count is 4,7.7.
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Eeeek, it is, I will rethink it. Thanks for pointing that out!
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This is a beautiful piece sweety .Thank you for sharing and goodluck to you in the contest. Best wishes and much love
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What a beautiful place to find inspiration from! I love it! And your haiku describes it perfectly! Wonderful job. I think you deserve a trophy of some kind with this piece.
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