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ghost lovers



 

silently i wait patiently for you

to slip through the walls of the castle

to be with me on a night like this

 

skies midnight black minus the stars of light

with only the moon to sensually guide us

into a passion worthy of our love

 

lost in each others arms

our bodies entwined in ghostly lust

your imagination speaks volumes

 

as i am consumed within my sexual dreams

waiting for your next ghastly move of seduction

my image creeps within your grasp

 

games that we play of chase

through the empty halls of the castle

slithering around corners disappearing

 

within a vapor of wan-tum lust

your heaving desire haunts me down

and seduces me within your hollowness

 

fulfilled by desire and heated rhythm of passion

screams of ecstasy fills the empty space around us

while we become one within our souls

 

our bodies drained into emptiness of lust

we float to the air-space above the castle

leaving only our spirits behind with memories of love

 

on this halloween night!

 

 

 

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  • Eusebius
    October 30

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    hmmmmm.... sex without bodies, interesting concept... but a very well done poem here, most finely and keenly put together and MOST appropriate to the season!!!


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 2, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry

    Well this pushes the bounds of PG rated for the young ones but this was an interesting write. This could be taken a couple of ways as far as whether or not it is two ghosts or two people and the ghost is a metaphorical device.

    Happy Halloween
    Tammy


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    this is fabulous mary , i am all a sweat now ,trick or treat was never like this dear wow


  • arafura gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    memories of love...

    Great stuff my friend! I have read it before and enjoyed reading it again! Quite a halloween extravaganza indeed... Good luck in the contest!

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