A path clearly marked.
A place to rest at the end.
All who come are served.
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by bethan-gaze.
750 points, ended October 19, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A lovely, clean haiku with a beautiful last line ...
"all who come are served."
Nice work!
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I can walk the path through to the end but to be served i must see
it is up to each to see and seek the path ...as i have my zen time out to think and reflect upon your words the 'cross thoughts' of mind and time. thank you good luck in the contest.
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hmmm...so true...tiss better to think about the big picture rather than our daily struggles. thanx.
-Pap.
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