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My Dream...

Your fingers brush against my cheek
As you gaze into my eyes...

I wonder what you are thinking...

Do you love me?
Is this just for comfort?
Am I wasting my time?

As all these thoughts run through my mind
You put your arms around me,
And resting your head on mine,
I hear you whisper,
"I Love You..."

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This is once again on the freestyle side, but it seems that freestyle is working for me as the words just flow out of my pen onto the paper.... This is my Dream, which may never come true, but with everything I am I want it to come to pass....

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  • Daizy21
    October 19, 2007

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    This is a lovely poem, I guess its my dream aswell, but I wouln't want to feel that I am wasting my time, other than that, yes, I would love to hear that I am loved.

    Its good to read something new fom you, you are a very talented poet!


    • Missy Lissy
      October 19, 2007
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      Thank you so much, not only for the comment, but for being my friend, and house mate..... C U Later....