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Crystal Powder

Winter

Piles of crystal powder
Swirling, dancing beautifully
in the chill of the air
The sounds of snow cracking beneath my boots
I remember
A game of hide and seek in a magical world
The pleasurable thrill of staying hidden  
While anticipating discovery at every second
And then being found, rushing into the warm embrace of ones parents
And going inside for a hot cup of chocolate and a hug
I remember -

 

The winter

Piles of crystal powder
Swirling, dancing magically
Like fairy dust lavishly sprinkled
On top of a nice cup of coco, magic childhood
Magic love - never fading...

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A happy memory...
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  • Mj gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    This memory must mean so incredibly much to you. I can't even imagine..
    Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
    I hope you are well.

    Best Regards, MJ

    • Zarokk666
      October 19, 2007
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      Thanks, MJ
      Your opinion mean a lot to me, since you are one of the best poets I know
      Hell, I would not be on AP if you hadn't shown me the page...

      Your friend forever
      Zarok

      Hope to hear from you soon...


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 18, 2007

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    Thank you very much for this beautiful entry. I really enjoyed your poem, and thank you for entering my contest. This was very lovely, ~blessings to you always~

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    This is a very nice piece.I love the snow.Thanks for sharing and goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes


  • Stardust-luvr
    October 18, 2007

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    fun in the snow has always been one of my favourite times in winter especially thr fun of snow ball fights in the first gentle snows of the season many loving blessings and thoughts always xxx

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