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Bound Lisa

BOUND LISA



Beautifully tied in intricate ropes
Offering her body as a rare piece of art
Unquestioningly laying herself open
Naked in body and soul, her
Devotion unchallenged

Little by little
Instinctively and longingly, she   
Submits to the desires of       
Astral her Mistress

18 October 2007

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An Acrostic

A contest entry

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  • Jeb
    July 24, 2008

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    Nice

    Damn, that was good. In just a few words you painted an excellent { and sexy } picture in my head. Thank you for that. This truly is a damn good poem. Why did we stop reading and commenting on each others poetry? I dont know but I think its time to start again.


    • slavelisa
      July 28, 2008
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      Thanks

      Glad you enjoyed this little piece...

      I agree we must start reading and commenting oan each others work again.

      Hope you are well

  • mcfreeman
    June 30, 2008
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    all tied up!!! YUP


    • slavelisa
      July 28, 2008
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      yes i was all tied up, it was great fun..

      Thanks for stopping by and taking time to read this piece

      Lisa


  • requiempoet gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    i haven't found many people on this site that can write acrostics about BDSM quite as good as you can! great job friend!!!

    • slavelisa
      December 5, 2007
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      Thank You

      Thank you so much

      This was prompted by a picture, and it just came to me. I guess i am so in the slave mode that i find it easy to write about BDSM in the simple ways, (without it being smutty). I guess i want to try and explain the lifestyle without making it seem that we are all weirdo's who just hurt each other for kicks

      I am pleased you enjoyed the piece.

      sl


  • Tattboyspet
    October 19, 2007

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    nice - lol - I know plenty people say they don't like acrostics, but I do ... if they work of course ...
    thank you for your entry

    • slavelisa
      October 19, 2007
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      Thank You, I do try to do something different occasionally. Normally my poetry rhymes thats how i get the rhythm going,


      • Astral Lady
        October 19, 2007

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        Well done - a lovely piece. And yes, the acrostic does work. You know just what your submission means and does to me
        Love and hugs,
        Your Mistress


        • slavelisa
          October 19, 2007
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          thank You Mistress, i do and i always want to give You more

          Your sl

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