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Companion

I am confused as how I got here.
Alone.
I am foolish.
I think of how your smile taught me to love.
I shouldn't have walked out.
I am in the worst of times.
I miss your ear's attention.
I missed hugging you when you cried.
Remember how we loved to eat ice cream so fast?
Our brains froze.
Now my heart is frozen.
I lost my life.
I lost my Hide-and-Go-Seek companion.
I was happier then,
When you were my friend.

Author notes

1) The better part of one's life consists of his friendships. --Abraham Lincoln

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  • Tzipora
    June 27
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    ahhh, this was lovely . i liked it a lot


  • Endeavor gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    Very Good


    I lost my life.
    I lost my Hide-and-Go-Seek companion.
    I was happier then,
    When you were my friend.

    very compelling words

    I felt the loss with you

    Well done

    Rick


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    Great thoughts on the quote..and does emphasize that we don't know what we had until it is gone. Very well written. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Jeannie