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Dirty Little Secret

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I don't love you.
I don't need you.

[But do that thing
  with your tongue again
  and I am all yours...]

It's not my fault
I didn't want this...

[But, oh GOD, I need it.]

I know I said I'll never
Love another man this way.

[But when you press
yourself against me...
  I want to explode.]

I cannot let them know
My darkest secret...

[I know I said
that I was afraid...
  Guess what, I lied.]

So sick of always being
the one to seduce.

[Dominate me, and
relegate me to your
  submissive little bitch.]

Tease me, please me,
and don't be gentle...

[So hurry up, Goddamnit...
  Hurry up, and
  fuck my brains out already!]

And I'll admit it
You've caught me at last.

[Are you happy?
I SAID IT!
  Now shut up, and kiss me!]
 

Author notes

Option 4: Some wonderful, homoerotic hardcore!

Based on a homoerotic short story that I am working on. My main character is bisexual, but claims to be homophobic, until a hot little encounter with an arch-nemesis forces him out of the closet.

Here's the story:
http://storywrite.com/story/120185

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  • still.she.waits
    April 24

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    this totally reminds me of the Savage Garden song,
    "break me,shake me"
    the language for this is perfect.


  • rerouni66
    October 29, 2007

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    Excellent!

    Wow to be honest I was thinking of writing some thing like this almost word for word. Is this the story you mentioned in a message to me? If so I would really like to see it. Sounds intriguing. Good luck in the contest!


  • Olin
    October 19, 2007

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    :D

    hah! i loved this, the rhyming and structer of the poem really worked for this. It's also basically what i'm looking for. Great job.
    I loved the line:
    "Tease me, please me,
    and don't be gentle."
    That line made me smile.
    Good luck.
    ~Angel


  • PastelMoons gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    "[Are you happy?
    I SAID IT!
    Now shut up, and kiss me!]"
    LOL Girl Power!!
    you rocked it out hun
    this is fantastic!
    Good luck!
    ~Pastel


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    October 18, 2007

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    OMG

    YOU ARE GOING TO DO AWESOME IN THIS CONTEST! I JUST KNOW IT! Hell, it's almost as if you know the person who's holding this contest quite well! I KNOW SHE'LL BE IMPRESSED! lol. It's spastic enough, very well written, great job and good luck in the contest! Once again, i know she'll love it!
    =D

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