Smiling brightly
Pretty face
Tender heart
Bright embrace
Kittened whiskers
Noses wet
Laughs and giggles
A safety net
Preparing this...
The life of an innocent.
A contest entry
- PIF "BIG POINTS" For Stardust-Luvr by Babisgal.
1900 points, ended October 18, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i enjoyed this read you said very encouraging words to her thanks for sharing this one
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Congratulations sweety
huggles
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Thank you very much for this beautiful entry. I really enjoyed your poem, and thank you for entering my contest. This was very lovely, ~blessings to you always~
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my dear friend you expressed what is deff sooooooo very important to me on such a personal level --- kittened whiskers noses wet (I have 2 brother and sister cats aged 4 1/2 years old that I adopted when they were barely 7 weeks old they are my world)~~ Smiling brightly Pretty face Tender heart Bright embrace (for the past 9 years I have been working with very severely challenged special needs preschoolers aged 2-5 yrs old)~~ Laughs and giggles (the laughter of my students and the wondrous light and laughter of senses of humours of my many AP friends and some coworkers/friends many loving blessings always xxxx
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Okay, author wanted me to post this, to save his/her secrecy for contest. He/she says that he/she MEANT to spell it Chrysantemum instead of Chrysanthemum.... It's for reason. Thanks for noticing those of you....
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your title should have an 'h' in there.
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This is a lovely piece for her.Im sure she will appericate it.Goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes
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