The pain in the pin that gave me a chance to feel
I needed to feel alive, to feel as if I'm here
There was a back I scratched too much
There was life I didn't love
I'd throw bricks at myself and they'd fall to my feet
I broke my foot too many times to feel the pain
As my back ached and my last life sprained weakism
I started to give into harm and I let myself down
The deeper I torn the more crimson
life screamed my name a I died along the way
A contest entry
- word bank and pic. inspired by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
i never even knew i won honour here! thanks alot!!
Ta for the inspiration,
Lea
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whew now this is great darkness here damn! i love pieces as this i try to write it but dont come out this good knockem dead in the contest
mrs enthralling
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pah il knock myself down instead
i wish hun
i bet you can
your Sea Thoughts poem was great.. and I have to say it was 4th but i didn't have atrophy for it.. although im going to comment it with kudoses to give it what it deserves
i hope you're having a good week!
roses and pens
lea xxx
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