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Autumn's Pain

Black veils and russet leaves
streaks of somber youth stranded
in mirrored marshlands of "i's" and whys???????
Those "faceless shapes of dawning
wade knee deep across wetlands
asphyiated by "non-toxic" red-tide
mans man-made genocide to poison
the seas and man and end over-
population's smells of dying:
mullet lying on slime
beached upon death's stench
sand and silt thickly matted
filthy invested waters growing
filthy airs
requiem mass in 3/4 time:
Listless morning dirge mourning
the green lichens of summer's
fallen boughs and songbirds
found voiceless...lost and drowning
in autumn's pain.

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  • ea silver member
    October 19, 2007

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    wow, this is an impressive interpretation of the prompt. I can't help but read this from a pro-environmental standpoint but it contains a wonderful weaving of multiple layers of meaning, I feel.