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What the eyes reveal

Look into your eyes and this is what was seen,
a creature from the sea
One with such creativity, no wonder love evolved so smooth
Charisma, style, and even perfection
Let's not forget your specialty of lurking around
The lord of world you absolutely are not
Cast away you were with your evil intentions
But as the source of the underworld you decided to amend
What happened to the love
And was the answer filled with truth,
or was it venom coming from your slithering tongue

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  • Glasyalabolas
    October 20, 2007

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    I find this piece very intriguing. Very nice imagery that paint a picture at face value, however, it can just as easily be taken as allegory or metaphor for something else.

    Good write.