Wherence a divide of a bad vibe
to why I care I have to wonder why
a new land is a person just met and I feel renewed
as I talk amongst friends you listen over and over again
ive... missed you dear beloved
i would kiss you but unfortunate force repels
wherever the stone the feather be you and I be stone cold if I don't introduce myself
to make myself known
I'ts been time and a half so lets kill time
long lived missing I've mourned over
you're back and I just hope you're back forever
You talk among new faces and I sink
I blend in the background and wait to make your acquatance
but you walk away so I turned my head as if we've never met
I deal with the fact that you don't want to be my friend
A contest entry
- Meaningful Personal Connections - points increased! by ellipsist.
3150 points, ended October 24, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sometimes what we hope is never meant to be. WIth the last stanza, my mind goes to the end of a movie that I dearly love 'The Butterfly Effect'. When they walk by one another years later and they lock eyes and then walk away. This poem is very reminiscentof that in the end. Well done. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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Cheers Donna
Thanks for reading and your comment.. god i haven't seen that movie for years.. im gonna try and watch it tonight.. thanksto you so thanks again
keep good and keep up the poetry!
Ta for la luck
hava good day!
xxx
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please don't rate or reply to my comment
I am normally not a sucker for happy endings, but I was hoping for a message of hope, at the very least, in a contest about meaningful personal connections
this poem makes me sad, for that, it is quite effective... thank you for sharing this entry
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...sometimes people aren't all we want them to be...
-Pap.
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definetely true
got to agree with that
thanks for reading hun xxx
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