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Tired

Always Tired
Always Troubled
Everyday is a drag...
It feels like I never sleep
Always carring a load
It seems no one understands
No one listens
Just need a break
Wish time would stop
Time to take a breeze
  A moment to breath
I always wish of that day
That I wouldn't be displeased
TIRED!




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  • Sandygram
    October 27, 2007
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    Great Write!! I think we can all use more time to just relax and slow down the hectic pace of life. I find taking time in prayer and just relaxing with thoughts of my many blessings relaxes me everyday. Take a little time for yourself each day. You take care, Sandy


  • mattharris
    October 26, 2007
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    Time For a Nap

    I always feel tired, but somehow Jesus always gives me the strength to endure. His yoke is Light. I look forward to spending eternity with Him. Then tiredness will cease. I like how you varied the lengths of your lines. It reads well and looks good on the page. Get some rest, now. mattharris


  • Never Fall in Love
    October 18, 2007
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    I think pretty much everyone can relate to this at some point or other in their lives. Time does speed by too fast and just seems to leave us all standing. Feeling tired constantly is a horrible feeling so you have my sympathy. Take care

    Never ♥