In a quiet place
in a silent neighbourhood
the banshee is roaming free
as the windows clatter,
the glass in them shatters
and you know that shes here for you!!
WWWWWWHHHHHOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHH
she passes you by in the blink of an eye
ssssssssSCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCREEEEECHHH
she wails in your face its a moment too late
DDOOOONGGGGGGGG
the church bells song you're gone!!
In a quiet place
in a silent neighbourhood
you're rushing from house to house
not a single soul is stirring
but a strange thing is ocurring
yes, you are now the new bansheee!!
wwhhhoooosssshhhh
you rush past someones window
DDDoongg
time up monrings here
your time has gone!!
Author notes
option 2 of da compition and it's picture e!
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Comments
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Oh you really plpayed on the mind making the sounds very effective to the reader. You had me hearing it all just as I was seeing it too. Great job! Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Ohh, this is a great one! Well done indeed!
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I could almost hear this poem while reading this
what a great way to add this onomatopoeia or however you spell that in here 
Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck to you!
Leander -
Great poem!
Keep up the good work and good luck.
Amber
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