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As If You Don't Enjoy Necromancing

So everyone rants
And I figure it's my turn
So here my words out
I will all churn

People hatin'
So irate an'
Angered Satan
Large-ass plate an'
Need new slate an'
So frustratin'
Circles gratin'
Against enamel teeth
Timing ponders
Mind it wanders
Must get blonder
Run out yonder
Lives will squander
From transponder
Now the condor
Ripping into flesh singing:

"Why can't we wake up?
Why can't we change?
Why can't we love
To the end of our days?

Why can't we wake up?
Why can't we change?
Why can't we love
To the end of our days?"

Love unstale
Not so frail
Undrunk ale
Please don't bail
Out on a rail
Drinking grail
Poison to my tongue
The one chosen
Time it's frozen
Stop your posin'
Tears are dozin'
Lies ambrosian
Flowers rose an'
Maiden's kite now utters:

"Why can't we wake up?
Why can't we change?
Why can't we love
To the end of our days?

Why can't we wake up?
Why can't we change?
Why can't we love
To the end of our days?"

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  • doyouloveit
    October 19, 2007

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    i love it you did an awesome job here very unique your course is brilliant wording

    Please don't bail
    Out on a rail
    Drinking grail

  • MarriedToTheDevil
    October 18, 2007
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    So Fantastic!!!!!

    it would make brilliant lyrics!


  • colorxmyxworld
    October 18, 2007
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    hey awesome write
    (high five)

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    Wow this is just a good my rants are never this organized.I just let my words flow.Thanks for sharing much love


  • -CrimsonTears-
    October 18, 2007

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    wow..i love it...and you....totally cool...you are a awesome writter...god i love you..

    you deserve 3 clappies...lol

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