Dear Love
My heart is under pressure, so I had to write this letter in hopes that you would read it help me make it better. I know you are real busy, to busy to ever see, all these moments that we spent together and what it does to me. My love for you is growing and I know that I should stop, but I think I hit my peak of love I'm standing at the top. I don't know why I feel this way I want what I cannot have, because you are like my forbidden fruit I reach what I cannot grab. My heart is now so hallow, a void has set in place while I run around the world for on this never ending chase. I don't know what I'm saying but I do know how I feel, yes my gold and silver's fake but I'm sure my love is real. I want you to think of it and end seal it with a kiss because I'm tired of chasing after you only to swing and miss. Now I am confronting you with my heart laying on the block, Oh I tried and I tried to end this love but I know it will not stop. I will see you in the morning once the sun rises to the sky, I will be your awakening sight, I will hold you with a smile.
Author notes
One of the most fun poems I have ever written.
A contest entry
- Looking For Ap Family by TheLostGirl.
525 points, ended October 23, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - They say a Broken-Heart mends with time... I'm Still Waiting. by Seeking Serenity.
600 points, ended November 2, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is really well penned by you. The rhyme is amazing and am sure loads of people can relate to wanting someone they cannot have. Thanks for sharing
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Beautiful letter. I would of giiven you higher then honorable in the contest. This is amazing and you should enter it in my contest.
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It's beautiful! Thanks for entering, and Good Luck!
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I'm sure this was fun to write! But it's also wonderfully expressed ... about wanting someone that cannot be got! I really liked the rhyme.. it flowed wonderfully through the piece and did not take away from the message in any way at all!
First of yours I've read and I can't wait to read more now!
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am glad you enjoyed writting it. I love the rhyme in this letter, whichi didnt have to be done I meant an actual letter but this was great too dont get me wrong I really like the line my silver and gold are fake but for you my love is real I adore that line because it makes you think of all the things we do to impress people with material items so great write and good luck
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